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The photo album stands open
Pages strewn about the blood-stained floor
Young faces, paper smiles
Scratched out with the razor
Such purgery
We were friends, once...
Lovers even
But like the tides
I drew away from you
Not to say you didn\'t carry away a part of me
Tucked safely beneath your arm in butcher\'s paper
Supper,
For one
I wonder, will it taste bitter?
Land on the back of your tounge and dissolve into a rusty sensation
I wish i could say \"Die\"
But I dont care enough to see you smile
So I sit here and destroy your memory
Picture by picture
The years slip away
Out of my hands into a red abyss
©2003-2009 ~adalay
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An ode to a past....

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:iconkwazo:
nice! love the imagery good work
:iconezo:
Stunning. You've truly frozen a moment of time in your writing, capturing all of it's emotions and complexity.

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/\_/\
( o.o )
> ^ <
:iconinsipid-crow:
i wish i could write like this thanks

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"the future ain't what it used to be"-yogi berra
:icontaye:
OH MY GOSH! WOW! that was really good. I love the way you captured the moment in my eyes. The end was PERRRFECT!

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It's the new phase, new wave,
Dance craze, anyways,
It's still rock and roll to me.
:iconfightforunity:
Absolutely amazing.........
:iconfightforunity:
Well, my first comment was all that needed to be said about this peice, but I wanted to say congrats on your first daily top favorites!! There will be more to come I'm sure
:iconinfiltrator15:
this ... is amazing...

"I wonder, will it taste bitter?
Land on the back of your tounge and dissolve into a rusty sensation..."

wow, that line stood out to me
sometimes i wonder what would happen, if love were to end. i know how i reacted the first time. what about the second? the third? would it be the same?
heartbreak is the bitterest of all experiences, the most painful.
sounds like you're angry, and you've portrayed that emotion very well here.
great work.

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Vic
:iconthefallofme:
i love it. its so perfect going to check out more of your stuff when im not at school. very very awesome.
-rachel
:iconrubenesque:
tHE IMAGES ARE JUMPING OFF THE PAGE. nICE WORK....

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April 22, 2003

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